I like the suspenseful feel of the beginning segment. Its a good hook. You might tighter up the editing on the Jenga sequence. It runs a little long. I like the Pause Here screen. Lets see if we can smooth out some of the camera movements. The b-roll is really good. Its natural and spontaneous, just like family. Is there an interview with your mom that you can put in. That would be good. Even if its just her audio over some of the b-roll.
I like the suspenseful feel of the beginning segment. Its a good hook. You might tighter up the editing on the Jenga sequence. It runs a little long. I like the Pause Here screen. Lets see if we can smooth out some of the camera movements. The b-roll is really good. Its natural and spontaneous, just like family. Is there an interview with your mom that you can put in. That would be good. Even if its just her audio over some of the b-roll.
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