The first minute is really good. You create a very strong hook with all the short snippet style interview sound bites. And the music works as well. Lets do some minor tweaking to the title screens in class first thing on Friday. I think we can make them look better. Do you have any b-roll that you can put up over Will at 2:08? That edit is a bit rough. Maybe something of him working on his virtual reality project. Your structuring is good. This project starts out very creatively and then flows smoothly from interview to interview. The information presented is interesting and not repetitive. Wrapping everything up with a good ending and some credit screens is all you need now.
The first minute is really good. You create a very strong hook with all the short snippet style interview sound bites. And the music works as well. Lets do some minor tweaking to the title screens in class first thing on Friday. I think we can make them look better. Do you have any b-roll that you can put up over Will at 2:08? That edit is a bit rough. Maybe something of him working on his virtual reality project. Your structuring is good. This project starts out very creatively and then flows smoothly from interview to interview. The information presented is interesting and not repetitive. Wrapping everything up with a good ending and some credit screens is all you need now.
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